The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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The two maps show an
island
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before and after the renovation for tourism.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
island
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experienced striking information. Most noticeably, before the reconstruction, the
island
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was surrounded by the sea and some trees;
however
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, many tourist amenities were built afterwards. Before the renovation, there were no entertainment facilities; there was only a small beach with some coconut trees in the east and west. After the reconstruction, the
island
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was marvellously equipped to serve tourism with infrastructure and
ccommodations
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accommodations
accommodation
. There were a lot of accommodation places to help tourists take a rest, and
besides
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that, there was a big restaurant for travellers to eat and drink.
Moreover
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, the pier was built for travel and is connected with the reception and the restaurant by a vehicle track. The footpath between accommodation places
also
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helps tourists travel
easier
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more easily
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. It is worth noticing that the reconstruction plan did not have any negative effects on the
island
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’s natural habitat.
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, more coconut trees have been planted around the
island
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.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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