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The maps show the changes of an office building between the present and the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the changes of an office building between the present and the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
two
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 maps give information about how an office building will change in the future.
Overall
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, the maps show significant changes in certain areas
such
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 as the kitchen and canteen
wil
Correct your spelling
will
 be replaced. Notably,
office
Fix the agreement mistake
offices
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 will become
large
Correct word choice
larger
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 and more areas. At present, there are
two
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 green spaces with grass in both the east and west. The three rooms
is
Change the verb form
are
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kitchen
Correct article usage
the kitchen
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, canteen and storeroom in the north of the building. In front of the storeroom is the toilet.
Next,
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there are four offices in the south.
In addition
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, there are
two
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 entrances
at the end
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 of the southern side and at the middle of the west. In the future, the southern entrance
wil
Correct your spelling
will
 be moved to the middle of the side. There will be
two
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 expanded offices and the remaining
two
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 offices will replace the kitchen and the canteen on the opposite side. The green spaces will be removed. On the right of the building, it will be replaced with a meeting area and a toilet. On the left of the building,
a
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an
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 outdoor seating area will be built.
Lasty
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Lastly
, a new coffee machine will appear next to the storeroom.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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