The system used for rubbish or garbage collection in your local area is nowt working properly. It is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Sir,
This
is sandeep kaur
, I want to enlighten you about the problems caused by Correct your spelling
Sandeep Kaur
system
used for Add an article
the system
a system
garabage
collection which is not working properly nowadays.
Correct your spelling
garbage
On every
Change preposition
Every
wednesday
Change the capitalization
Wednesday
garabage
collectors come to our Correct your spelling
garbage
locatily
to collect all the rubbish but now no one is coming to pick Correct your spelling
locality
location
this
Change preposition
up this
all
waste from Correct determiner usage
apply
last
wednesday
without any information. All the litter is outside Change the capitalization
Wednesday
of
each and every house causing Change preposition
apply
difficulities
Correct your spelling
difficulties
to
the residents.
It is now house to mosquitoes and flies as all Change preposition
for
garbage
is still Correct article usage
the garbage
being
there. Unnecessary verb
apply
Morever
, the Correct your spelling
Moreover
diesases
are increasing rapidly owing to the Correct your spelling
diseases
continous
Correct your spelling
continuous
raining
Replace the word
rain
from
Change preposition
for
last
3 days.
I want you to tackle Correct article usage
the last
this
problem without any delay. I believe that garabage colectors
should be informed right away about Correct your spelling
garbage collectors
this
and you can hire big
truck to throw Add an article
a big
this
waste for us.
Thank you
Sandeep kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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task achievement
To improve your task achievement score, include more specific details about the problems caused by the garbage collection system not working and how exactly it is affecting the daily life of the residents.
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Make sure you maintain a polite and formal tone throughout the letter. Watch for informal expressions and spelling errors.
coherence cohesion
Include a clearer introduction and conclusion to enhance the logical structure of your letter. This will make it easier for the reader to follow your points.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. For example, one paragraph could describe the problem, another could explain the effects, and a final one could suggest solutions.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are polite, which is appropriate for this type of letter.
task achievement
You have addressed the main points of the task prompt, which shows a clear understanding of the task requirements.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,