the three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001

the three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001
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Contained in the pie charts is data pertaining to the expenditure in a UK school in three different timestamps, 1981, 1991, and 2001.
Overall
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, Insurance, teachers’ salaries and equipment witnessed varying degrees of increase,
while
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other workers’ payment and resource patterns dropped.
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, academic staff salaries contributed the largest proportion of expenditure throughout the survey
whereas
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insurance had the smallest share.
To begin
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, wages paid to the teacher accounted for the most significant in 1981. Before increasing to a half
then
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slightly went down by 10% in 2001.
This
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statistic was followed by other
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salaries, in 1981, the number was nearly a
third,
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after which a minimal decrease in 1991
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ended with 15% after 10 years. A similar trend was observed in money spent on furniture and equipment, beginning at 15%
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it experienced a noticeable fall of 10% in 1991 before having a remarkable rise to a quarter
at the end
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of time shown. Turning to the expenditure on resources, the figure started at 15%, which is equal to furniture and equipment.
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, it went up by only 5% during 10 years, in the third year shown, it levelled off at approximately one-tithe.
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, Insurance had by far the smallest category out of five at the beginning with 2%,
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figure changed small throughout a decade until 2001 when it climbed fourfold.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget allocation
  • educational expenditure
  • financial management
  • infrastructure investment
  • evolution of costs
  • annual spending
  • strategic funding
  • capital outlay
  • operational costs
  • resource allocation
  • fiscal trends
  • cost analysis
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