The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts below provide data on the ages of Yemen’s citizens and Italy’s natives in 2000,
along with
forecasts for 2050.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graphs that the
number
of middle-aged Yemenis was predicted to increase the most.
On the other hand
, the
number
of mature Italians was estimated to decrease the most. For Yemen, in 2000, the majority of the population was composed of the youngest generation. The
number
of
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people aged 0 to 14 years old was
at
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50.1
percent
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.
However
, the
number
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juvenile was foreseen to drop to 37
percent
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in 2050. For the adult Yemeni, it was 46.3
percent
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in 2000. It was calculated to rise
into
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57.3
percent
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in the next 50 years.
In addition
, the
number
of
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elder in Yemen was 3.6
percent
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in 2000 and it was expected to change slightly] in 2050. The prediction is only 5.7
percent
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. In 2000, mature Italians constituted the largest portion of the country’s population. The
number
of young citizens was 61.6
percent
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.
Nevertheless
, it was projected to decline to 46.2
percent
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over the next few decades. Not only was the
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teenagers estimated to drop
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but
also
the
number
of children. It was 14.3
percent
in 2000 but it was predicted to fall into 11.5
percent
in 2050.
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, the proportion of
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senior
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, which was 24.1
percent
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in 2000, was forecasted to more than double by 2050.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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