The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts demonstrate changes in
age
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groups of
Yemen
and Italy's
population
in 2000 and the predictions made for 2050.
Overall
, the largest proportion of
population
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the population
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of
Yemen
and Italy is aged below 60
years
old. The least share of
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the population
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in
Yemen
belongs to
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the eldery
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eldery
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elderly
group
, but it is the age
group
of newborn to
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group
in Italy. Interestingly,
Yemen
would have
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a higher
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percentage of
people
who are able to work and pay taxes in the future when compared to that of Italy. In 2000, half of
population
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the population
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in
Yemen
was
people
aged 0-14
years
old, accounting for 50.1
percent
. The rest belonged to
15
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-59
year old
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group
at 46.3
percent
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and elderly
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more than 60
years
old at 3.6
percent
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per cent
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. It is estimated that
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will change in 2050 as
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aged 15-59 could take up the largest share at 57.3
pecent
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per cent
, followed by the age
group
of 0-14
years
old at 37
percent
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and
elderly
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the elderly
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at only 5.7
percent
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in order. For Italy in 2000, there was the largest
group
of
population
aged 15-59 at 61.6
percent
. 24.1
percent
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and 14.3
percent
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per cent
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belonged to
people
aged
of
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over 60 and 0-14
years
old respectively.
However
, despite the fact that
people
at
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their working
ages
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age
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are expected to
take
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make
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the
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largest part of the
population
, the percentage of elderly becomes larger, accounting for 42.3
percent
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per cent
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.
Also
, there is a
sligt
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slight
increase in
people
who is younger than 14
years
old at 11.5
percent
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.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, population, years, group, people, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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