The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the proportions of
people
in Yamen and Italy Use synonyms
differentitated
by 3 age groups in 2000 and 2050.
Based on the chart, in 2000, Yamen's Correct your spelling
differentiated
population
mostly came from ages between 0-14 Use synonyms
years
old Use synonyms
for
50,1% of its Change preposition
apply
population
, Use synonyms
then
it followed by Linking Words
group
of 15-59 Add an article
a group
years
old and Use synonyms
group
of age over 60. Meanwhile, in 2050 the Add an article
a group
population
is predicted to Use synonyms
fill
by Wrong verb form
be filled
people
from 15-59 Use synonyms
years
old Use synonyms
that
will Correct pronoun usage
who
takes
about 57,3% of Verb problem
make up
total
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the total
population
, followed by teenagers group Use synonyms
then
older Linking Words
people
.
On Use synonyms
other
hand, in Italy in 2000, the Correct article usage
the other
population
was mostly filled by Use synonyms
adults
(15-59 Use synonyms
years
old) with Use synonyms
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a percentages
percentages
was 61,6%, the second place was older Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
people
, and the third place was adolescents. In Use synonyms
the
2050, the ranking will stay the same but with Change the article
apply
change
in the percentages, where the Correct article usage
a change
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adults'
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adults
population
will be corrected to 46,2%, the teenagers will be 42,3%, and the older Use synonyms
people
will be 11,5%.
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Overall
, it can be concluded that in 2000, Yaman's Linking Words
population
was dominated by teenagers, Use synonyms
while
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the
Italy was dominated by Correct article usage
apply
adults
. Use synonyms
Then
, in 2050, the Linking Words
population
of those 2 countries will be dominated by Use synonyms
adults
.Use synonyms
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