The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line chart illustrates the percentages of
households
that owned electrical appliances over almost a hundred-year period
, while
the second graph provides information about the amount of time spent by households
weekly doing housework in one country during the same period
.
Overall
, it is evident that there is an inverse correlation between the number of home appliances and the time consumed by families. While
the number of home gadgets increased throughout the period
, the number of hours dedicated to housework declined.
What stands out from the first graph is that no one had a refrigerator in 1920. However
, the figure for that experienced a significant rise by 100%, existing in every house. Also
, a third of households
owned vacuum cleaners in the first period
, and after that, it went up consistently to 100% in 2000.
In addition
, washing machine ownership increased from 40% in 1920 to just over 70% in 2019, except for a small decrease in 1980.
In contrast
, the time that households
spent on housework per week went down considerably from 50 hours to 10 hours over the whole period
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