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he table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

he table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
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The information provided figures the forest area in
millions
 of
hectares
 in six distinct
part
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parts
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 of the world including Africa, Asia,
Europe
, North
America
,
Oceania
, and South
America
 in 1990, 2000, and 2005.
Overall
,
Europe
 emerged as the biggest forest area throughout the given period,
where
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Oceania
 as the least surface with forest.
Europe
 and Asia
apperead
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appeared
 with an increasing trend of forested
land
,
while
 others witnessed the opposite. It can be seen from the table that, forested
land
 in
Europe
figures
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 989
millions
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million
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of
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hectares
 in 1990,
increased
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which increased
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 continuously by years to 1001
millions
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million
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of
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hectares
 in 2005,
dominated
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 the forested
land
 counts among other parts of the world. With 946
millions
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million
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hectares
 in 1990, South
America
 emerged as the second biggest
counts
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count
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 of forested
land
 but consistently dropped to 882
millions
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million
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hectares
 in 2005. Africa, North
America
, and
Oceania
also
 experienced a downward trend from the
begining
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beginning
 to the end of the time given, Africa with 749 dropped to 691
millions
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million
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of
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hectares
, North
America
 from 708 to 705
millions
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million
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of
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hectares
, and
Oceania
 from 199 to 197
millions
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million
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hectares
.
On the other hand
, Asia experienced an upward trend of forested
land
 counts with 576
to
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millions
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million
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of
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hectares
 in 1990,
increased
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which increased
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 to 584
millions
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million
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of
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hectares
 in 2005.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words millions, hectares, europe, america, oceania, land with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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