The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The diagram demonstrates the manufacturing cycle of
sugar
from sugar
cane.
Overall
, the production process of sugar
includes 7 steps. These steps include growing, harvesting, crushing, purifying juice
, evaporation, centrifuge, drying and cooling stages.
As the illustration depicts, at the beginning of the manufacturing, sugar
canes grow for approximately 12-18 months. Then
, grown sugar
canes need to be harvested. There are 2 ways to do it. Huge agriculture vehicles can harvest them or farmers can cut them without any technological assistance. After
this
, harvested sugar
canes are thrown into a crushing machine which converts them to juice
.
Following the process, the juice
is purified by a limestone filter. Then
, purified juice
is heated and becomes sugar
syrup which contains sugar
crystals. These sugar
crystals have to be separated from syrup for consumption. In the centrifuge step, this
necessary separation occurs. In the end, sugar
crystals are dried and cooled in machines, consequently
, the sugar
is manufactured successfully. Therefore
, it is ready to use.Submitted by smd1212 on
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