You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, • give details of your study plans • explain why you want to get a part-time job • suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Hi, my dear friend How are you ? I'm going to Korea to study and you've been living there since 2020.
Additionally
, I would like to do a part-time
job
while
I'm studying so you can inform me about how to find a
job
. I will study English to be a translator and deepen my knowledge of English, and Korean languages. I was studying in Uzbekistan in
this
area, but I inclined that go on to higher education in another country. I appeal to learn foreign languages and I keep on doing
this
. I tend to look for a part-time
job
because of my education and to live in
this
country. I am trying to get a scholarship,
however
, I must find a
job
until
this
. It will be a hard time if I do
this
by myself, but I won't give up on it. You are my reliable person so you can give me information that which jobs are best to do and which ones
is
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giving me more money and so on.
Above all
, you're fair-minded and I think that you will give your hand to me. I believe you! Your darling
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task achievement
Include more precise details of your study plans, such as the name of the institution and the duration of your study. This would improve the completeness of your task response.
coherence cohesion
Ensure consistent use of tense throughout the letter to improve coherence. For instance, 'inclined' should be 'incline', and 'is giving me' should be 'gives.'
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are warm and friendly, suitable for a letter to a friend.
task achievement
The letter addresses all parts of the task prompt: study plans, the reason for a part-time job, and how the friend can help.
suitable writing tone
Expresses appreciation and trust in the friend, which adds a personal touch to the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Educational aspirations
  • Work experience
  • Financial independence
  • Resume (or CV)
  • Local job market
  • International student
  • Legal requirements
  • Student work permit
  • Employment trends
  • Time management
  • Networking
  • A part-time position
  • Balance studies and work
  • Job hunting strategies
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