You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, • give details of your study plans • explain why you want to get a part-time job • suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Hi, my dear friend
How are you ? I'm going to Korea to study and you've been living there since 2020.
Additionally
, I would like to do a part-time job
while
I'm studying so you can inform me about how to find a job
.
I will study English to be a translator and deepen my knowledge of English, and Korean languages. I was studying in Uzbekistan in this
area, but I inclined that go on to higher education in another country. I appeal to learn foreign languages and I keep on doing this
. I tend to look for a part-time job
because of my education and to live in this
country. I am trying to get a scholarship, however
, I must find a job
until this
. It will be a hard time if I do this
by myself, but I won't give up on it.
You are my reliable person so you can give me information that which jobs are best to do and which ones is
giving me more money and so on. Change the verb form
are
Above all
, you're fair-minded and I think that you will give your hand to me. I believe you!
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task achievement
Include more precise details of your study plans, such as the name of the institution and the duration of your study. This would improve the completeness of your task response.
coherence cohesion
Ensure consistent use of tense throughout the letter to improve coherence. For instance, 'inclined' should be 'incline', and 'is giving me' should be 'gives.'
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are warm and friendly, suitable for a letter to a friend.
task achievement
The letter addresses all parts of the task prompt: study plans, the reason for a part-time job, and how the friend can help.
suitable writing tone
Expresses appreciation and trust in the friend, which adds a personal touch to the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,