you have been offeed a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visitedbefore. You have an acquaintance who lives there. Write a letter to the acquaintance . In your letter exlplain your situation, say why you feel unsure about living in the city, ask some questions about life in the city.

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Dear Meredith, I hope you're doing fine, I don't know if you still remember me but I was your batchmate in university. I am writing

this

letter to seek advice regarding the city and the cost of staying there. I was hired in the hospital where you are living, I was expecting it was here but the vacancy available was in your city. I am not sure about moving, since I am not familiar with the place

although

, they are providing accommodation and

also

a transportation allowance still I have doubts about transferring there. I saw your posts on Instagram,

moreover

, it looks like a safe and nice place.

Therefore

, I want to talk to you to ask more about the place and what are services available there. Despite being unsure, maybe you will help me to change my mind. Hope for your response when you get my letter.

This

is my number (1234567), I look forward to your call at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Isabelle

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph presents a distinct idea or aspect of the situation for clarity.

coherence cohesion

A friendly opening and closing can enhance warmth in the letter. Aim for a more personalized greeting and sign-off.

task achievement

Address the task fully by providing more detail in your explanation, expressing your feelings more extensively, and asking a variety of questions about the city.

task achievement

Adjust the tone to sound more inquisitive and less doubtful, matching the letter's purpose of seeking information and advice.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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