The charts below show one government's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in Arts events in the same years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show one government's spending on culture and education in 1995 and 2005 and the number of people participating in Arts events in the same years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are two diagrams have been done for the following exploration, where the first one showcases the percentage of authority funding for the cultural sector during the period
from
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1995 and 2005, and the second picture provides data about public engagement in cultural events for the same period
accordingly
. So, as can be revealed the most popular direction in the Arts was definitely engagement in the music sphere among the whole society.
To begin
, as a matter of fact, around half of the total
budget
, the government subsidised Music direction in 1995, and just approximately 20 per cent of the
budget
for theatre improvements.
However
, the
budget
sum allocated to the theatre sector sharply increased two-fold over 10 years.
Conversely
, the visual arts investment by the government dwindled twice within ten years and achieved the same output as the literature sphere, around 10 per cent of the
overall
budget
for the calendar year. As regards public involvement in these four Art sectors, the first place in people's participation should be given to the Music sector, where a petty increase has been observed in 10 years, approximately 150 thousand individuals.
Last
but not least, the public contributed more to the theatre events in comparison with the visual arts activities.
To conclude
, the lesser indicator in both tables was in the literature sphere for the whole period, which
as a result
justifies that society unfortunately was not involved in the literature.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • budget allocation
  • noticeable rise
  • sharper increase
  • upward trend
  • distribution
  • participation rates
  • government funding
  • arts events
  • financial commitment
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