The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.
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potatoes
which people in
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different regions produced and consumed in the year 2006. Units are measured in
million
tonnes
and
kg
per person respectively.
Overall
, it can be seen that
European
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consumed the highest quantity of
potatoes
while
the lowest belonged to Africa. Another point worth mentioning is that Asia was the biggest
producers
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five.
To begin
, Europe's consumption ranked first with 96.1
kg
per person, followed by North
America
with 57.9
kg
. The third and fourth highest consumers were Asia and Sound and Central
America
as each individual ate 25.8
kg
and 23.6
kg
potatoes
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of potatoes
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respectively. At the lowest place was Africa, nearly one-seventh of Europe (14.1
kg
per person). In terms of production, Asia and Europe were the two largest potato producers, with 131.2 and 126.3
million
tonnes
in 2006. North
America
stood at the third position,
however
, its contribution was just one-fifth of the European whare, 24.7
million
tonnes
. The remaining areas including South and Central
America
and Africa produced the least of
potatoes
, around 16
million
tonnes
for each.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Agricultural capacity
  • Dietary preferences
  • Cultural significance
  • Economic affordability
  • Trade policies
  • Food security
  • Production levels
  • Consumption patterns
  • Imbalance
  • Global agricultural trends
  • Technological advancements
  • Supply chain enhancements
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