Some people believe that it is good for a country’s culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Around the world, an increasing amount of people are opting for imported foreign
Films
and TV programmes because
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good for the nation’s culture.
However
, there are some others
argue
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who argue
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that producing local
movies
are
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a better choice. The writer of
this
essay will look at both sides and agree with the former statement because it gains lots of overseas cultures that can be learned from foreign
movies
. On the one hand, some individuals believe that foreign
films
not only provide useful knowledge that they learn from international culture but
also
have a high quality and the details make sense that the directors have to focus on each scene.
Therefore
, every movie that
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in
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overseas always
have
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a high turnover
due to
the high in individuals keen to watch
this
roll of
films
. Take Hollywood
films
as an example, a publisher in most USA
movies
, these kinds of
films
provide an impressive and excellent quality for the moviegoers, so can release a masterpiece for everyone.
Moreover
, most of the moviemakers
also
provide
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subtitles for each film which are easier for people to understand and improve their English skills.
On the other hand
, some people think that invest local
films
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the better
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because of the low income it
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from
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produce these
own
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films
. They do not need to spend more
money
on importing these types of
films
in
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abroad
that
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which
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is really complicated and
increase
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a lot of problems.
Furthermore
,
movies
that have mother tones can gain more opportunities to understand the details in each scene. They can easily
to
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find out the information and the main details of these
film
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films
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that
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help
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them find more exciting and satisfying
of
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movies
. From my perspective, foreign
movies
gain a lot of international cultures that they can learn from
it
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. Governments do not have to spend
money
on
films
sot
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it will not
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too much time to
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the
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ideas.
Instead
, they can allot
money
on other facilities by the way constructing more
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or just even
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service
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that
is
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convenient to maintain their healthy and wonderful life. In conclusion, spending time and
money
on international
film
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films
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or local
films
are depend
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on the favourite and benefit of each kind.
Hence
,
this
essay pre more on
oversea
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overseas
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films
because of the various
benefit
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it
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they
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provides
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to both
viewer
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viewers
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and producers.
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task achievement
Be sure to clarify your main points and arguments more effectively. Some ideas are getting lost because of unclear language.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure of your essay by ensuring that each paragraph clearly follows from the previous one. This will make your essay easier to follow.
task achievement
Make sure all main points are well-supported by specific examples or evidence. While there are some examples present, more consistency is needed.
coherence cohesion
Good overall structure with introduction and conclusion present.
task achievement
Some relevant examples, such as the mention of Hollywood films, are used effectively to support points.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural diversity
  • foreign films
  • TV series
  • exposure
  • cross-cultural understanding
  • stimulate creativity
  • inspire
  • local productions
  • cultural heritage
  • employment opportunities
  • contribute to the economy
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