The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by four types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
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the
information about people who affected the Correct article usage
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noise
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pollution
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day
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countryside
in 2007.
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the countryside
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cities
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given
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the given
noise
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countryside
has zero Use synonyms
noise
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pollution
.
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day
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daytime
time
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pollution
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night
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nighttime
time
in the given two places. Traffic in Use synonyms
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day
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the day
time
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cities
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at night
night
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nighttime
time
has around 48 but in the Use synonyms
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countryside
it has around 35 in the Add a comma
countryside,
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day
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daytime
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noise
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pollution
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has
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day
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is around 10 meanwhile 8 in the Use synonyms
night
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time
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in the
countryside
it Use synonyms
has
around 8 in the daytime and 6 in the Verb problem
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night
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time
. Aircraft Use synonyms
noise
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pollution
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day
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cities
have around 3 and 2 respectively. Use synonyms
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countryside
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pollution
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cities
which is 3 and 2 respectively.
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pollution
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countryside
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time
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