The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by four types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
The bar chart illustrates
the
information about people who affected the Correct article usage
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noise
pollution
through
four kinds Change preposition
of
such
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as
Traffic, Train, Aircraft and Industry Change preposition
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in
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day
and night
in urban and countryside
in 2007.
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the countryside
Overall
, it can seen that people affected
more where Add a missing verb
are affected
cities
than rural areas in given
four types of Correct article usage
the given
noise
and the countryside
has zero noise
pollution
.
In detail, day
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daytime
time
has more pollution
than night
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nighttime
time
in the given two places. Traffic in day
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the day
time
in cities
accounted two
third Change preposition
for two
while
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at night
night
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nighttime
time
has around 48 but in the countryside
it has around 35 in the Add a comma
countryside,
day
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daytime
time
and 25 in the dark time
respectively. Train noise
pollution
has
in the Unnecessary verb
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day
time
is around 10 meanwhile 8 in the night
time
in urban places but the
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in the
countryside
it has
around 8 in the daytime and 6 in the Verb problem
is
night
time
. Aircraft noise
pollution
has the least trouble in day
and the nighttime in Add an article
the day
a day
cities
have around 3 and 2 respectively. In contrast
, the countryside
has more aircraft pollution
in the nighttime than cities
which is 3 and 2 respectively.
Furthermore
, surprisingly, industrial pollution
has zero in the countryside
but the cities
only have day
time
which is 1.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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