The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
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The given maps perfectly depict the changes a small town, namely Islip, will face.
Overall
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it is evident that more public facilities will be provided
in addition
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to enhanced access to different parts of the town thanks to constructing a dualcarriage way. In terms of the northern side of the map, the row of shops located just to the north of the main road,
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the countryside near it, would be replaced with a bus station, shopping centre, car park , and a new residential area. Southwards to
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area, there is a main road, which will be demolished to make way for building a path only for pedestrians.
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, the road will be expanded vertically before reaching the centre, to cover the whole space. As far as the southern part of the area is concerned,
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the current housing place next to the shops will remain, a new one will be introduced right to the east of it.
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,
this
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introduction requires minimizing the park right next to the housing.
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, the school and the housing near it will be separated from the centre by the southern carriageway.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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