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The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980.

The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980.
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The diagram illustrates the significant change in Liverton docks from 1980 to current.
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, a comparison of the two types of maps reveals a complete alteration from a manufacturing area to an urban zone in four decades in Liverton Port. In the year 1980, Liverton Dock was a factory region with a range of facilities
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 as cranes, ships, and warehouses, but after that year, the harbour saw essential
transforms
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transformations

The word transforms doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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. The most noticeable is that all wandering vessels cut down to and changed ship museums in the stream.
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 at the beginning of the tributary, a big bridge with a flood fence was built to connect the northern and southern parts of the river.
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, storehouses were reconstructed for urban facilities, namely an education centre, apartments, and a playground for children in two parts of the port. Two cranes were demolished, one of them for the sailing club; the second disappeared. In spite of the crane, in the western south, a new hotel was established.
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, a new walking road was constructed along the estuary in the south. A new facility—a place for parking—was established in the southern east.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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