The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980.

The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows how Liverton docks have changed since 1980.
The two maps show the changes in Liverton docks up to now, from 1980.
Overall
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it is clear that
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this
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was once
this
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was an industrial area. But,
due to
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the significant redevelopments and addition of new facilities, it has now become an entertainment area. In 1980, the Liverton dock had a couple of sides of the river.
While
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the northern side has two cranes and two warehouses, the southern part has merely one crane and a warehouse, especially a way that leads to the coast. There were many ships going through the river.
By contrast
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, the ship museum was installed in the middle of the river, and a barrier that prevents possible floods. Especially, there is a newly constructed bridge located just next to the barrier, which connects both the commercial and entertainment areas of the current Liverton dock. On the southern side, a new parking area, a big hotel, and the apartments between them
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were established,
while
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the way to the coast still remained at the right corner.
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, people can relax by walking on the new path located alongside the beck. In terms of the northern part, kids and adults can enjoy the new playground are, and the sailing club. For those who want to study
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at an education centre next to the sailing club.
Although
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there were cranes and warehouses in 1980, they have been replaced and new facilities added.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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