The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps show the current and future planned development of the Islip
town
center
and describe the comparisons of the changes over both time periods.
Almost every Change the spelling
centre
town
center
will be updated with new facilities and buildings seeing new innovations.
There is a main road running west-east through the Change the spelling
centre
town
center
. Change the spelling
centre
This
road divides
into two branches, the southwest of which leads to the school and the southeast of which leads to the park. Wrong verb form
is divided
While
, as
Correct word choice
apply
this
main road is replaced by pedestrians only due to
planned development, the school is now replaced by a dual carriageway. In the countryside, which consists of housing and shops, the shops in the area will be enlarged and turned into a shopping center
, and there will be surrounded by bus and car stops. In Change the spelling
centre
Add a comma
additional,
additional
there will be built new buildings in the northeast and the southeast.
Replace the word
addition
To conclude
, Islip town
center
which is slated to be completely redeveloped, will change a lot from its current state.Change the spelling
centre
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