The charts below give information on average life expectancy in four countries, from 1993 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the average
life
expectancy
rate of four developed countries between the years 1993 and 2008.
Overall
, Indonesia dominated highest among its peers on the basis of an increase in life
expectancy
based on years from 1993 to 2008. However
, Japan has a higher life
expectancy
ratio
.
To begin
with, Japan has an 82.7 average life
expectancy
with a soaring life
expectancy
ratio
of 5.1 for 15 years. According to
the statistics, Korea has an increase of 9.3 life
expectancy
ratio
within the given time period and has a rate of 79.2 average life
expectancy
. The U.S. appears to be the least surged among the rest on the basis of life
expectancy
from 1993 to 2008. On the other hand
, it has a 77.2 mean life
expectancy
ratio
. Furthermore
, Indonesia improved a lot during the time mentioned with an overall
jacked up of 14.1 ratios whereas
it held a value of 70.9 average life
expectancy
.Submitted by praneeth2094 on
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