Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, numerous people

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that doing

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a monotone

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activity

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activities

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is more

convinence

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convenient

. At the same time, there are individuals who

doing

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various

activity

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activities

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to enjoy their lives.

This

essay will discuss both

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my view

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and my own opinion. On the one hand, it is undeniable that individuals decided to do their monotone activity all day. There are some reasons that forced them to do

that

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things

.

First,

they feel

convenience

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and confident.

Moreover

, they feel that changing is not necessary because

of

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apply

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they feel completely satisfied with their job, families, and the way they

lives

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and

no

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do not

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need something more

improve

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to improve

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.

For instance

, people often work at the same company

instead

of looking for the better one or doing

self improvement

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self-improvement

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due to

the fear

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of taking

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a risk and they do not succeed and rather

choosing

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to stay in their comfort zone.

On the other hand

, in my point of view, change is always

good

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a good

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things

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thing

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. We have to improve ourselves

,

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since

this

is

modern

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a modern

the modern

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era

which

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in which

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is

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technology

keep

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improving.

Moreover

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the world never

stop

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moving and growing.

That is

why, it will

feels

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feel

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bored

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and useless if we cannot grow together as

the

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technology did.

Furthermore

, doing various

things

and changing could teach us how to

adopt

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adapt

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with

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to

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new

environment

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environments

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and difficult situations.

For example

, those people who

had

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have

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a lot of

experiences

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experience

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will

easir

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easier

to grow their

carrier

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careers

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and bring them a lot of opportunities. In conclusion, I think it

is

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depends

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the

individuals

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individual

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it self

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itself

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to

decided

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decide

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what is the best decision for

themself

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them

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. whether they will choose the same

things

all day or do

opposite

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the opposite

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.

Aslong

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As long

as they feel that it is suitable for their lives.