The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power.

The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing drinking

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by using solar energy.

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, there are 6 steps, commencing with obtaining solar power and ending with the final product of purified

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for

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. At the first step of the process, the panel whose function can absorb the heat from the sun,

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convert the heat into a form of energy by a converter machine. By

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step, the

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from the underground well is

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drawn up by a pump, before being contained by the

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tank, consisting of a wooden platform and a container. Once the

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has been contained by the

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tank, the

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tube starts to purify the

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. In the subsequent stage, the

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which is processed by a

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tube, forms into drinking

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. The final product can now be distributed for consumption by opening the tap to collect

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,

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the

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is contained

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a moveable container and

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transported.