As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With the rise of the

internet

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popularity, newspapers

are

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become out of date. I strongly agree with

this

statement

due to

the fact that almost everything that people want to know

are

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on the net.

Furthermore

, with the

emerging

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emergence

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of new technology, web

network

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networks

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can be accessed from anywhere with their mobile phone, allowing unlimited possibility to access huge

number

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numbers

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of

information

.

Firstly

,

habit

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the habit

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of searching

information

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for information

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through the newspaper is being shifted to the

internet

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,

this

is

because

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the convenience that they offer. Almost

every

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the

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information

that

essentials

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are

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already on the websites.

Furthermore

, by surfing through the web people will not only obtain

information

, but they can

also

make money from it. The web network offered a limitless number of possibilities.

For instance

, by using the

internet

many workers can work remotely, acquiring better

salary

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by working for foreign

company

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companies

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.

Secondly

, the continuous evolution of technology has

allow

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everyone to access the net from their palm with the help of their mobile phone.

This

phenomena

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is a massive thing,

because

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and because

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of it people nowadays can

keeping

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up

to

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with

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the newest

information

in

second

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. If the

internet

is used wisely, it can bring the greater good

for

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the human

races

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race

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.

Furthermore

, it can be used to spread

numerous

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apply

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positivity to the entire

of

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apply

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the

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apply

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world. One clear example is

organization

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organizations

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such

as WWF and UN can use it for their campaign, spreading the news around the globe. In conclusion, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past because

the

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emergence of the

internet

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Internet

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is true

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.

This

is happening because technology keeps renewing itself, allowing humans to have more convenience.