Many people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences in earning between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whilst, many individuals argue that producing a more

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community depends on the small disparities in salary between the wealthiest and the most impoverished members.

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the writer advocates that

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is not the best way to create a happy society through ensuring similar income

due to

the amount of work which the rich contribute to

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society and the maintenance of

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life. It should be acknowledged that it is unacceptable that the rich deserve the higher

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for what they have done to the community.

In other words

, the significant contribution and their abilities in academic fields are unable to be paid at a low price.

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a consequence, the wealthy tend to strike and it affects the entire economy of an enterprise or even a country.

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, if the salaries of

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rich people are lower than

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what they expected to receive, they will criticize and

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unemployed rather than be paid

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a low salary.

However

, critics justify that minimizing the difference in

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between the rich and the poor can assist in many pressing issues. They believe that the

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in the impoverished workers’ salaries

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the ability to reduce the homeless rates and social evils.

This

is true in some cases but

this

leads to complacency and alleviation of motivation, as they do no work as much as how much they are paid.

Thus

, many companies should not pay the poor with high

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. The author holds a belief that the reduction in the gap

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payment between the wealthy and the poor

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difficulty in maintaining a

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life. What the author means is that the rich are incapable

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the previous living expenses with lower income, as they have to lessen the expenditure to fit it with the lower salary.

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a consequence,

this

has a detrimental impact on their family and descendants. In brief, there are still better solutions to produce a more delightful community

instead

of reducing the disparities in remuneration of the wealthy and the impoverished. The writer thinks that

this

approach will create arrogance in the poor employers and

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in sustaining

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a premium life.