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The graph below shows our methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Contained in the bar chat is information relating to the proportion of four different ways to deal with waste in different countries.

The graph below shows our methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Contained in the bar chat is information relating to the proportion of four different ways to deal with waste in different countries.
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, it can be seen that
landfilled
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is
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 more popular than the others except in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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.
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, the percentage of recycled in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 and landfilled
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in
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 the
U.K
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UK
 is more significant than any other type. First of all, the proportion of burnt, used as chemicals and landfilled in
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the Netherland
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Netherland
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Netherlands
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 is inconsiderable, ranging from 8% to 14%
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 recycled
account
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 for nearly 70%. Regarding the U.K, the percentage of landfilled is 66%
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 burned, used as chemicals and recycled is much lower, respectively 3%, 18% and 12%. Turning to the remaining statistics, it can be observed that there is a similarity in the percentage of landfilled in Italy and Spain, with 40%. In terms of other methods in Italy, the proportion is nearly the same, around 20%. In Spain, the ratio of burnt, used as chemicals and recycled
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 in order, with 30%, 18% and 12%.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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