Some people believe that children should be given homework tasks from the time they start school. Others believe that children should be free to spend their leisure time as they see fit. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a belief that teachers should give

homework

to students at an early age,

while

others claim that it is better to let the pupils do their hobbies in

spare

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time.

While

acknowledging the importance of

homework

as a way of practising,

this

author shares the same view as the latter statement because of

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creativity and socializing. It is undeniable that

the

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young people are really keen on

entertaining

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. The majority of them

loves

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to play

games

or watch videos on the Internet, which comprises of boys and girls. Many conducted research illustrate that entertainment can benefit one’s certain abilities. Experiencing board

games

or puzzles can enhance inventive thinking, which plays a pivotal role in

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latter

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later

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life. Taking Winston Churchill as an example, since he was a child, he had always been interested in playing pretend wars.

Therefore

, when he was mature, he was capable of organizing a whole national army and

led

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England to victory against its rivals.

However

, critics justify that

homework

is

also

crucial in a child’s development. Finishing those tasks will improve the

students’

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student’s

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critical thinking and

problem solving

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skills. Whilst

this

may be a valid point, components, including myself, argue that playing is more important than those questions, especially in childhood. Without that, people will be unable to develop fully before becoming grown-ups. Another advantageous aspect that can be considered in entertainment is teamwork, which is essential in combating

games

. In the present day, competitive

games

mostly require the players to work efficiently as a group in order to win.

Otherwise

, it would be impossible to finish an objective given by a

task giver

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because fighting alone is not recommended.

For instance

, Valorant or PUBG are the most popular ones in

this

field, grouping strangers

in

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different teams.

Hence

, communication is vital during the whole match, advocating users to talk to each other so that information about their enemies can be conveyed, resulting in an awareness of one’s

surrounding

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and victory. In conclusion, children should have more freedom to pursue their interests during leisure time because it can eventually foster one's inventiveness and socializing skills. Despite the fact that having

homework

can help them train other skills.