You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered that you had left a coat there. There are some important belongings in the pockets. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain that you have left the coat there say what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was in the pockets make some suggestions about how to get all of your belongings back
Dear Pat,
How is it going? thank you so much for permitting me to stay at your house all weekend I really enjoy sharing my spare time together. Unfortunately, I'm writing to you, because, now that I am chilling at home, I realized that I left my coat at your house.
I would like to tell you that I can't wait for our next meeting, but I have my driver's license, and my credit cards in one of its pockets. As you know, I'm gonna travel
this
week so I need my identification to board the plane. Just in case you don't remember what it looks like, it's my beige coat made from polyester and buttons at the front, and one sleeve is damaged. I think that I left it in the guest room's wardrobe or maybe on the couch, I don't remember.
If you agree, I can pass tomorrow morning for your house and pick it up. I can get up early or at the best time that works for you.
Please let me know once you find it and what time we can meet.
Cheers,
Brad.Submitted by easocadaguica on
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grammar tip
Ensure that minor grammatical errors are minimized to enhance clarity.
clarity tip
Consider breaking more complex sentences into simpler ones for better readability.
task achievement
The letter appropriately addresses all aspects of the task, including explaining that the coat was left behind, describing the coat and its contents, and suggesting a plan to retrieve it.
tone
The letter maintains a friendly and appropriate tone throughout, which is suitable for the context of writing to a friend.
structure
Each paragraph is focused on a single idea, making the letter easy to follow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite