The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009.

The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009.
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The pie graphs illustrate the proportion of a variety of leisure sports for American citizens between two years, 1999 and 2009.
Overall
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it is clear that
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individuals are intrigued by walking in both years
while
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people are not fascinated by yoga in the first year and by both jogging and
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in the second year.
To begin
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with, looking at the year 1999, the fraction of walking occupied a gigantic 29% followed by soccer which was 17%. There were two groups which had almost the same portion, the first group was
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and bicycling, and the second group was camping, swimming and jogging, which were nearly 12% and 7%. Yoga came in
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place with only a meagre 5%. What is interesting to note is that the slow running was less than the
aerobics
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by approximately 2 times.
On the other hand
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, the percentage of walking in 2009 still remained in first place with an enormous 31% whilst soccer and swimming shot up to a massive 18% together.
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, yoga and swimming jumped up and arrived at 10% and 18% respectively;
besides
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, bicycling,
aerobics
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and jogging were seen to decrease to a nominal 7%, a tiny 4% and a minuscule 3%. What is surprising to see is that the difference between camping, at 9%, and
the
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soccer was 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words aerobics with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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