Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem that may lead to the extinction of animal life s and human life What are the causes of deforestation and what can be done to reduce its dangers?

Over the years, there have been many discussions that destroying

of rain

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forest

could endanger the stability of co-living around there, including the life of

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animals

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and

human

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humans

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. Regarding

to

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that motion, the writer strongly believes that action will cause

negatively

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for any

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in the long term. In

this

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essay, the writer would like to reveal the primary reasons

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deforestation's act and the vital

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that should be taken

for minimizing

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to minimize

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the risks that humanity is going to face in the future.

Firstly

, as

population

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the population

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of

human

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hikes

exponentionally

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exponentially

, people tend to look for

habital

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habitable

habitual

space to

fulfill

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their basic needs,

for instance

, the

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of

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living

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place

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. Because of the limited

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in urban

city

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, people search

other

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option

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to build their

house

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, which

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around the rural area or even in untouchable

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forests

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forest

lived by endangered

animal

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animals

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.

Secondly

, it is necessary to take a serious policy for anyone who

have

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been violating the regulation of protecting the

forest

.

While

,

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the government thinks of that policy, they could

do

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another

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action plans to reduce

of

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that potential event,

such

as expanding the awareness of

the

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nature for

human

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humans

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in the future. In conclusion, the government's intervention plays a big role

to prevent

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in preventing

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any action that could harm the

forest

.

Hovewer

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However

, the government

also

needs to have a concrete solution for providing the needs of society without risking the natural's balance.