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The bart chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The bart chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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This
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 graph illustrates details about how families in one nation paid their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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, It is known that families in every country apply to spend money on important things
such
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 as food, clothing, and medical fees.
First,
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In the
year
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 1968 household
goods
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, personal
goods
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 and transport were at the same percentage near the tenth. food had a significant increase in the
year
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 1968 which means it was the most important at that time. Gas service and personal
goods
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 remained at the same value at approximately 4% in the
year
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 2018 and it was the
last
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 thing people would spend money on at that time, Second is household
goods
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 which are ranked at almost 8%, Payments for Leisure had
apply
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applied
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 considerable rise for the entire
year
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, goods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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