The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The graph provides information concerning the Urban
Population
in four Asian countries from 1970 to 2020,
as well as
its forecast for 2030 and 2040. Generally speaking, as an
overall
trend the number of residents who lived in cities in four Asian countries increased during the period and
predicted
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to reach a peak in 2040. as shown in the graph, the urban residents in Malaysia have rocketed from about 30% of the total
population
in 1970 to 75% in 2020, and it
predicted
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will continue growing to 85% in 2040.
Similarly
,
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Indonesia
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community who live in the city
also
jumped up from 10% at the beginning of the period to 50% in 2020 and will continue to increase to 60% in 2040.
On the other hand
, in Thailand, the city's
population
shows a slight yet consistent rise. Its
population
grew from below 20% in 1970 to 30% in 2020 but
then
climbed up to 45% in 2040 based on its forecast. Meanwhile, the Philippines shows
fluctuating
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trend, start approximately 30% in 1970 and increasing to 50% in 1990, but
then
it dropped to 40% in 2010. after that, the
population
start rising to 45% in 2020 and will continue to grow and reach 50% in 2040.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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