The charts below give information the ages of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050
The given pie charts compare the percentage of populations falling into three
age
groups in Yemen
and Italy, in 2000 and predictions for 2050.
It is obvious that Yemen
has a younger population
than Italy and the same is predicted for 2050. Additionally
, it is expected that the populations of both countries will age
by 2050.
In 2000, more than a
half of the Correct article usage
apply
population
in Yemen
were
14 or under, Correct subject-verb agreement
was
while
the figure for those aged 15 to 59 was slightly lower, at 46.3%, and people
aged 60 over
just accounted for 3.6%. Italy had an older Correct word choice
and over
population
, about a quarter of Italian people
were 60 or over, whereas
more than 60% were people
aged to
15 to 59, and 14.3% were children.
By 2050, it is projected that the percentage of old Change preposition
apply
people
in Italy will nearly double to 42.3%, while
the figures for the 15 to 59 group
and children will decline by almost 15% and about 3%, respectively. In Yemen
, the 15 to 59 age
group
is anticipated to become the dominant age
group
, accounting for 57.3% of the population
, while
the percentages for the oldest and the youngest group
are expected to be 5.7% and 37% respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
groups
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