The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates the population of people who play
four different kinds of sports from 1985 to 2005. Wrong verb form
played
Overall
, it clearly displays that the number
of rugby players
dropped significantly, while
the number
of tennis players
increased throughout the period. Over 20 years, the population of badminton and basketball players
remained relatively stable.
To begin
with, rugby was the most popular sports
, which had approximately 250 Fix the agreement mistake
sport
players
in 1985. However
, it has shown a downward trend from 1985 to 2005, became
the least favourite Correct word choice
and became
sports
in 2005 by keeping nearly one-fifth of the Fix the agreement mistake
sport
players
than in 1985. On the other hand
, tennis had the second largest group of the
Correct article usage
apply
players
around 150 in 1985. After, it gained more popularity and has shown a moderate increase in their numbers. The population of tennis has overtaken the number
of rugby players
in 1995.
Furthermore
, the number
of badminton and basketball players
remained relatively stable. Throughout the period, basketball had approximately 80 people in the group whereas
badminton had around 50 people respectively.Submitted by JE
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