The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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This
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graph illustrates the population of people who
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four different kinds of sports from 1985 to 2005.
Overall
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, it clearly displays that the
number
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of rugby
players
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dropped significantly,
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the
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of tennis
players
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increased throughout the period. Over 20 years, the population of badminton and basketball
players
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remained relatively stable.
To begin
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with, rugby was the most popular
sports
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, which had approximately 250
players
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in 1985.
However
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, it has shown a downward trend from 1985 to 2005,
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and became
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the least favourite
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in 2005 by keeping nearly one-fifth of the
players
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than in 1985.
On the other hand
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, tennis had the second largest group of
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players
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around 150 in 1985. After, it gained more popularity and has shown a moderate increase in their numbers. The population of tennis has overtaken the
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of rugby
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in 1995.
Furthermore
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, the
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of badminton and basketball
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remained relatively stable. Throughout the period, basketball had approximately 80 people in the group
whereas
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badminton had around 50 people respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, players with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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