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The bar chart below shows US seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forcast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022.

The bar chart below shows US seafood imports between 2002 and 2022 and the forcast for 2032. The pie chart shows the geographical structure of these imports in 2022.
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The bar graph illustrates the amount of imported
seafood
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 products from the US in different countries around the world in the year 2022.
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, it can be seen apparently that the country that imported the largest proportion of
seafood
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 from America was China,
whereas
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, the least common one was Ecuador.
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 the chart, the US
seafood
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 products had the biggest market share in China, accounting for 28%, followed by Thailand and Canada which comprised 23% and 16%, respectively. Meanwhile, there was a similar number in Indonesia and Other section, which constituted 9%. Focusing broader
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 the rest of the information, Vietnam had 8% in
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 import category,
however
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, there was only 7% of imported
seafood
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 from America in Ecuador, leading to the lowest percentage compared to the others.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words seafood with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • imports
  • exports
  • trade relations
  • forecast
  • consumption
  • depletion
  • local fish stocks
  • globalization
  • geographical distribution
  • dominance
  • biodiversity
  • trade agreements
  • proximity
  • economic impact
  • environmental concerns
  • overfishing
  • carbon footprint
  • logistics
  • market dynamics
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