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The table below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000

The table below shows the information about medical care in three European countries between 1980 and 2000
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The given table provides data about the medical services in three different nations in Europe from 1980 to 2000.
Overall
, it can be witnessed that the numbers in
Sweden
 were always higher than in the other two countries.
Additionally
, it can
also
 be observed that the proportion of beds in hospitals served tended to increase throughout the period in almost all nations;
however
, in terms of the number of physicians and the median day people stay in hospital, the figures changed differently in each area.  Looking at the numbers in
further
 detail, the ratio of beds which belong to hospitals in
Sweden
 was noticeably greater than in
France
as well as
Australia
 and it even rose slightly and reached 6.9
at the end
 of the duration. In
France
, that value rose gradually in the first decade of the timeframe;
nevertheless
, the figure in 2000 was as twice much as it was in 1990 with 1.6. The similarity
also
 happened with
Australia
 which started at 1.4 in 1980 and ended up at nearly 3.7 in 2000. Turning to the remaining statistics,
while
 the proportion of physicians in
Australia
also
 went up slowly with 0.1 higher per year, the opposite was true with
France
.
Besides
, in
Sweden
,
although
 the number declined in the first decade, it soared again during the rest of the period and reached 3.8 all. In terms of the average level of people staying in hospitals, the figure reduced slightly during the twenty years given in
France
 and fluctuated respectively in
Australia
 and
Sweden
.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, france, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Healthcare
  • Healthcare expenditure
  • Life expectancy
  • Medical technology
  • Government spending
  • Population health
  • Access to medical care
  • Healthcare policies
  • Economic climate
  • Inflation rates
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Public health
  • Quality of care
  • Preventive medicine
  • Chronic diseases
  • Healthcare infrastructure
  • Universal health coverage
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