The maps show the changes in Liverton docks between 1980 and the present.

The maps show the changes in Liverton docks between 1980 and the present.
The maps illustrate developments which took place in the Liver town
since
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1980 to now .
Overall
, a comparison of the
two
maps reveals a complete transformation from a manufacturing area to residential complex In the year 1980 , the town was a large manufacturing area with a number of
cranes
and ships. The most notable is the
river
which flows through the town and divides it into
two
parts .
Moreover
, there 3
cranes
and three warehouses which are both located across the
river
. More precisely ,
two
cranes
and
two
warehouses situated in the northern part the rest of them on the east side of the map . By now , the area was covered by residential and all of the
cranes
and warehouses had been demolished
instead
was
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education
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and kid’s playground on the north side .
The
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southern side
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the western corner was built hotel and next to it was an installed walking path which was across the
river
also
there were built apartments and parking .
Finally
, on the
river
was installed a ship museum and a bridge was erected.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, cranes, river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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