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The pie chart compare the presentage of utilized water in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007.

The pie chart compare the presentage of utilized water in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007.
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The pie chart
compare
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compares
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 the
presentage
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percentage
 of utilized
water
 in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007.
Overall
, The
Food
Industry
 always had
the
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a
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 large amount of
using
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water
 in both cases.
Nonetheless
,
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the
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Building
Industry
 showed
opposite
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the opposite
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 effect usage of
water
. In 1997 The
Food
Industry
 illustrated
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a
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sizeable number, containing
the
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apply
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48% of
using
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water
resource
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resources
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.
Then
service
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the service
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industry
 took 13%
while
 for Building
industry
 promoted only 5% of
water
.
Moreover
, The Householding uses hold 19% and
for
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Manufacturing carried 15% of
waterage
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water
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. In 2007 The
Food
Industry
 subtracted 41% of
planet's
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the planet's
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water
that
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apply
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showed
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showing
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 the
heightst
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highest
heights
 total
of
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usage
water
 in both years.
However
, across from
Food
Industry
 the Building
industry
 displayed the deepest number. In 1997 for Building
industry
 promoted 5% of
water
then
 in 2007 it decreased to 2%.
In
addition
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addition,
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Hte Householding
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the householding
 use and Service
industry
 took quite more
chellanges
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challenges
during
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over
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 10 years. The Service
industry
 switched from 13% to 25% and
Householding
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households
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uses
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use
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 from 19% to 21% of supplies of
water
.
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