The graph below shows the average house prices in 3 countries between the years 1997-2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average house prices in 3 countries between the years 1997-2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how the price of an average house changed from 1997 to 2014 in three different
countries
(A,
B
, and
C
)
Overall
, all three patterns of price changes somehow resembled one another, all having increased significantly over 17 years. In each
country
, a permanent dip in prices followed a sudden rise in the middle of
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period.
Countries
A,
B
, and
C
started off with almost the same average housing prices – about $130k, $125k, and $120k, respectively. Prices in all
countries
in question grew steadily over the next four years; and by the year
2000
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2000,
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they had reached the figures of $250k (
country
B
), $200k (
country
A), and $130k (
country
C
). In 2001,
country
A’s trend experienced a sudden increase by almost $75k, reaching a point of $275k. The trends of the other two
countries
B
and
C
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also
showed
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increase of approximately $25k and $5k, respectively. Up until 2003, the trend
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country
A kept growing rapidly, reaching a point of $550k. The other two
countries
also
grew stably :
countries
B
and
C
were at points of $26k and $245k by 2007. IN 2008,
countries
B
and
C
showed a significant dip
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but
then
kept growing consistently. By the end of the period,
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country
countr
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country
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, b, c, country, k with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dip" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average house prices
  • significant trend
  • fluctuations
  • comparison
  • peak
  • lowest point
  • steady period
  • economic factors
  • political factors
  • historical context
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • noticeable fluctuations
  • major changes
  • given period
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