The graph below shows the average house prices in 3 countries between the years 1997-2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how the price of an average house changed from 1997 to 2014 in three different
countries
(A, B
, and C
)
Overall
, all three patterns of price changes somehow resembled one another, all having increased significantly over 17 years. In each country
, a permanent dip in prices followed a sudden rise in the middle of given
period.
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a given
the given
Countries
A, B
, and C
started off with almost the same average housing prices – about $130k, $125k, and $120k, respectively. Prices in all countries
in question grew steadily over the next four years; and by the year 2000
they had reached the figures of $250k (Add a comma
2000,
country
B
), $200k (country
A), and $130k (country
C
).
In 2001, country
A’s trend experienced a sudden increase by almost $75k, reaching a point of $275k. The trends of the other two countries
– B
and C
- also
showed noticeable
increase of approximately $25k and $5k, respectively. Up until 2003, the trend Add an article
a noticeable
od
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of
country
A kept growing rapidly, reaching a point of $550k. The other two countries
also
grew stably : countries
B
and C
were at points of $26k and $245k by 2007. IN 2008, countries
B
and C
showed a significant dip,
but Remove the comma
apply
then
kept growing consistently. By the end of the period, Correct your spelling
country
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country
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