Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Why is this happening? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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complain

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families

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are not close to each other if

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with the past. One possible reason is the advancement of technology that

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individualism amongst society

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it might be a

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for

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families

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, it could be a drawback because it could affect our social

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with the disadvantages of

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trend that outweigh the advantages. The possible reason

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the trend is the advancement of technology that makes individualism in society increase. Parents still work through their

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after work and they do not have enough time for their

children

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and

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unhealthy communication

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parents

with

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their

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or

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of

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people

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have time to

get

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heal and clear their

mind

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. There are

circumtances

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circumstances

that make parents

being

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toxic to their

children

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,

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, they are abusive and threaten their child,

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,

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the distance

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could help other

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relieve for a second.

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, in an ideal family, each member

have

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different roles and the distance makes

human

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is

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unable to obtain the

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benefit

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.

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, these roles develop

human

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ability

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to interact with

people

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and how they should communicate,

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, losing one of them might decrease

these

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this ability

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ability

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, is important and

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ability

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is developed through a relationship between

family's

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member

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members

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where they can feel safe to express their feeling.

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, without

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closeness,

a child

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children

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are not fully developing certain aspects

for

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their lives.

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, the bounding between family is important because it affects

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children

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ability

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to socialize and their relation

between

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with

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other human beings.

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it might be

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benefit

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for

children

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from toxic family

background

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, the drawbacks still outweigh the benefits.

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, I agree that

people

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should have a good

relation

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relationship

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with their

familiy

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family

families

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