In some countries, students live with their family while studying at a university. In other countries, students attend university in another city. Do you think the advantages of living away from family home while attending university outweigh the disadvantages?

Some

students

choose to stay with their family

while

enrolling in

university

in some nations,

while

students

in other places opt for living afar their homes. In my viewpoint, I believe that residing in another city brings more benefits for people of

this

age group. On the one hand,

students

dwelling in a far-from-

home

place will possibly undergo many hardships related to self-management. They will be overwhelmed with numerous challenges that they need to adapt by themselves without any immediate help from

parents

or acquaintances.

For instance

, when they fall ill, they have to take care of themselves independently

due to

distance barriers

that

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parents

are unable to provide timely care as when they were at

home

.

Moreover

,

students

studying far from

home

are usually prone to homesickness.

This

is

due to

the psychological fact of leaving their familiar shelters, they tend to reminisce about the

time

spent with family members which can lead to some of the negative emotions.

On the other hand

,I suppose that

university

individuals dwelling in

home

-remote places could develop essential attributes that are fruitful for

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future

career

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and could

also

address some problems associated with staying

home

.

Firstly

, within a few years, those

students

,who previously relied on

parents

, will all mature and must seek jobs for a living ,

thus

living without exclusive parental care. It is necessary for

students

at

this

age to foster

the

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sense of independence, to become accustomed to self-management, and to learn how to save money and reasonably expend

while

living alone.

This

is because

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university

time

,

students

still have

time

to experience new things and learn how to tackle their mistakes

while

doing everything solitarily, which will be well-prepared for their future.

For example

,

while

living far from

home

,in order to earn their own money, some of them will take part in several part-

time

jobs as they will probably find out their shortcomings

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fix them on their own.

Moreover

, residing in a family

home

while

studying at

university

could distract

students

from

the

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academic tasks.

For instance

, some

parents

, especially in Asian cultures,

parents

at times continuously send their children on small errands

while

they have to accomplish

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task

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at school, which disturbs them from their work, and in

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they won’t complete the task in

time

.

To conclude

, there are some

students

who choose distant accommodation for

university

while

others are with their families.

Although

living far from

home

can bring some downsides to those people, I firmly believe that it could provide us with many upsides

such

as

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skills for the future and be a solution to deter distractions from

parents

while

at

home

.