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Writing Samples
Band 9

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions about how to care for your pet describe other household duties ​Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Sonu, I hope you are in good health.
Firstly
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, I am so relieved that you will take care of my house and pets when I am away. If you find any difficulty, you can call my uncle living at Queenston Drive. His contact number is 12345678. You need to do some basic household duties every day like dusting, vacuum cleaning, and watering plants present in front of the main door.
Along with
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 that, there are some indoor plants which need to be watered once a week. Don't forget to keep clear the dustbin every Wednesday.
Furthermore
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, I have a pet cat whose name is Jugnu. She is very friendly and mostly eats dry fish which is kept inside the fridge. You can give her 10-15 pieces twice a day. Another thing is I have a fish aquarium just beside the T.V. The fish food is kept above the fridge. Please don't hesitate to call me in case you get lost. Best wishes Neha

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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down the paragraphs into even smaller chunks to improve readability.
task achievement
Ensure that there are no minor grammatical errors or typos by proofreading your work again.
task achievement
The letter covers all the required points: contact details, pet care, and household duties.
task achievement
The tone is friendly and well-suited for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is logical and flows smoothly from one point to the next.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and contribute positively to the formal structure of the letter.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • express gratitude
  • accommodation
  • dietary preferences
  • medication regimen
  • exercise regimen
  • household chores
  • security protocol
  • scheduled services
  • reciprocate the favor
  • gesture of appreciation
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