The graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period.

The graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period.
The given line graph illustrates the average monthly income of the
Japanese
and the
prices
of televisions (black & white and colour) from 1953 to 1983.
Overall
, it can be seen that
while
the average
Japanese
monthly salary rose, television
prices
experienced a significant drop during the
period
.
In addition
, in the same time frame,
TV
prices
were mostly higher than the
Japanese
mean earnings. Regarding the
prices
of television, black and white
TV
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TVs
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cost 110
thousand
yen
in 1970, which was the highest figure throughout the
period
shown. 10 years later, a significant decrease of 70
thousand
yen
in
this
cost was recorded. The
prices
of
this
type of
TV
gradually fell to almost roughly one-fifth
thousand
yen
in 2000. Similar patterns can be observed in the cost of colour
TV
.
Although
the price of
this
means of entertainment was a hundred when it first appeared in 1980, it declined to only half
at the end
of the
period
. In terms of salary, at the beginning of the
period
, the
Japanese
only earned 20
thousand
yen
monthly.
This
number gradually increased by 10
thousand
in 1995 and
at the end
of the
period
, the average monthly salary of people living in Japan grew to approximately 70
thousand
yen
in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words japanese, prices, period, tv, thousand, yen with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.

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