Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention towards the garbage collection system not working at all.
Well, I am living on 6th North Street in New York City and here the rubbish collection truck has not arrived timely. Moreover
, If they arrive then
they leave half of the garbage in our front yard. This
pattern Is formed repeatedly in our neighbourhood.
Let me explain our situation here, First,
we try to ignore this
issue and get along with
the situation however
, the truck has not arrived for more than 3 days and we are exhausted by the smell of rubbish. Furthermore
, our kids try to play in our front yard but they are frustrated by the smell of garbage.
Here I want to propose a few best solutions according is that need an internal inspection of what causes this
type of inconsistency in the collection of waste daily. As well as
arrange few more trucks in our areas to avoid any future trouble.
I hope this
matter will resolved as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully
BirenSubmitted by birenp046 on
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