The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compasions where relevant. Wirte at least 150 words.
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The provided line graph illustrates how much raw meat consumed in a European nation from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, there was a decline in consumption of an
amount of beef, Correct article usage
the
lamp
and fish, Correct your spelling
lamb
while
the figure for chicken surpassed beef , making it turned
into the most dramatic purchase from 1989 to the Wrong verb form
turn
end
of the period.
The amount of beef was
eaten Unnecessary verb
apply
by
per person started at 220 Change preposition
apply
grams
, then
it witnessing
a fluctuation in the first ten yearsWrong verb form
witnessed
,
before it decreased to 100 Remove the comma
apply
grams
at the
end
of the period
On the contrary
, the figure for chicken had an
Correct article usage
apply
increase
from just under 150 Replace the word
increased
grams
per person to just over 200 grams
in 1989 and went up constantly to nearly 250 grams
at the
end
of survey
.
Approximately 150 Add an article
the survey
a survey
grams
was consumed by
per person each year in Change preposition
apply
nation
examined in 1979, with a decline to about 75 Correct article usage
the nation
grams
in 2004.Meanwhile, the figure for fish went down slightly from about 60% to just under 50% and had a gradual maintain throughout the end
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words end, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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