The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart compares data about the
figuret
of people Correct your spelling
figures
figure
that
played 4 Correct pronoun usage
who
diffrent
types of sport namely, Badminton, Basketball, Correct your spelling
different
Tennis
, and Rugby
in
particular
district between 1985 to 2005.
It is Correct article usage
a particular
obious
, Correct your spelling
obvious
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the firt
firt
time Correct your spelling
first
Rugby
was popular
sport, but in 2005 the Badminto and Add an article
a popular
Rugby
had same
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the same
poistion
and Correct your spelling
position
was
third Correct subject-verb agreement
were
instead
of,Tennis
that initially
had second level but finaly
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finally
was
the most famous sport.
Verb problem
became
According to
the Rugby
line,Rugby
experianced
reduced Correct your spelling
experienced
experience
slight
because at the beginning had 250 Change the word
slightly
rival
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rivals
however
the competitor became lees
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less
in to
50. Join the words
into
Nevertheless
, in 1985 at start
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the start
tennis
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of tennis
player
was 150 so Fix the agreement mistake
players
this
trend has moderatly
increased so that in 2005 the rival was 230. Correct your spelling
moderately
moderated
Amezingly
, in 1995 Correct your spelling
Amazingly
Tennis
player
was Fix the agreement mistake
players
same
as Correct article usage
the same
Rugby
player
.
Fix the agreement mistake
players
Although
, for Basketball and Badminton respectively we can see same
trend. In fact, in these lines Change the article
the same
beggining
from 90 and 55 Correct your spelling
beginning
player
Change to a plural noun
players
thereafter
had rapid chnges
.Correct your spelling
changes
Henc
, in 2005 the Correct your spelling
Hence
competitor
were Fix the agreement mistake
competitors
same
as Correct article usage
the same
1985
.Change preposition
in 1985
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tennis, rugby, player with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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