Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

An argument appeared among people that

phones

are not allowed to be used by

children

during the

school

day

but others believe the opposite. Mobile

gadget

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during the

school

day

can distract

children

from studying, but

on the other hand

,

phones

can be helpful for them to

study

with many advanced features. I believe the

use

of

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gadgets

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by

children

in

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during

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school

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the school

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day

should be ok as long as parental control exists. The idea of prohibiting

children

from using

phones

in

school

days is because it can distract them from

study

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or doing their homework. It has been a concern for people that excessive usage of

phones

by the young generation can be harmful. There is evidence that games and social media

for instance

, which are featured on

phones

, can influence

children

to excessive phone usage and lead them to neglect the value of

study

.

On the other hand

, the

use

of

phones

can be helpful for

children

to

study

with features in it. The access to the internet and some applications in current

phones

with high technology is considered helpful for

children

to

study

.

For example

,

children

can access any source of information required with an internet connection and there are a lot of applications available that can help

children

study

such

as the Ruang Guru application that consists of learning material which accessible easily or even a translation application. I believe that the

use

of

phones

can be a good development for

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children

to help them

study

during

school

days with parental supervision.

Parent

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A parent

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should control

on

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apply

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the

use

of

phones

by their

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children

, in terms of

the

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apply

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purposes

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purpose

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limitation and time

limitation

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limitations

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.

Childern

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Children

should be advised and supervised that

phone

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phones

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can be used during

school

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the school

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day

only for

study

purpose

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purposes

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and limit them

into

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to

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particular

time

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times

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to prevent them

with

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from

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excessive

use

. In conclusion, the debate

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wheter

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whether children

childern

should be allowed to

use

phones

during

school

days or not

are

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still

apperead

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occurring

in society. But

i

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personally believe with parental supervision, the

use

of

phones

can be

an advantages

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an advantage

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to help

childern

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children

to

study

.