You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, •give details of your course and your arrival/departure date •explain your accommodation needs •ask for information about getting to and from the college
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Rony Roy, from India. I am writing
this
letter to get information about the accommodation facility in
your Change preposition
on
college
campus. This
is my first time
going out of the country alone . I am very excited to join in
your training in your reputed Change preposition
apply
college
as a student.
I am going to join the CPC Certification medical coding course. The duration of the course is 6 months which is going to start on the 1st of May. I am planning to come there by 29 April. My departure time
is 1 pm and will arrive in UAE at 8 PM.
I need accommodation for a short period of time
. as I have limited bugged also
I do not have time
to find a good room with safety, I do not have any relatives or friends there to talk that is
why, I think the college
hostel room will be the best option to stay for rest of my course.
Moreover
, I wanted to ask some questions regarding your stay. 1) I want to know the exact location of the hostel. Is it near to college
or far from college
? (2)total cast of stay for 6 months? (3) what facilities will get with accommodation? if you have any brochure
Fix the agreement mistake
brochures
will
be great and helpful. thank you.
Looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Your faithfully.
Rony Roy.Wrong verb form
would
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grammar
Check your grammar and punctuation more carefully. For example, 'bugged' should be 'budget' and 'talk' should be 'help.'
structure
Ensure that you clearly separate your ideas into distinct paragraphs. For instance, present the course details, accommodation needs, and questions about the hostel in separate paragraphs.
coherence
Provide a more polished closing sentence. Consider something like, 'Thank you for your assistance and I look forward to hearing from you soon.'
tone
The letter is friendly, polite, and maintains an appropriate tone throughout, which makes it suitable for the context.
task response
You provided all the necessary details, including course, dates of arrival and departure, accommodation needs, and specific questions about the hostel, making your response complete.