You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, •give details of your course and your arrival/departure date •explain your accommodation needs •ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Rony Roy, from India. I am writing

this

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letter to get information about the accommodation facility

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your

college

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campus.

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is my first

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going out of the country alone . I am very excited to join

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your training in your reputed

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as a student. I am going to join the CPC Certification medical coding course. The duration of the course is 6 months which is going to start on the 1st of May. I am planning to come there by 29 April. My departure

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is 1 pm and will arrive in UAE at 8 PM. I need accommodation for a short period of

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. as I have limited bugged

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I do not have

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to find a good room with safety, I do not have any relatives or friends there to talk

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why, I think the

college

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hostel room will be the best option to stay for rest of my course.

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, I wanted to ask some questions regarding your stay. 1) I want to know the exact location of the hostel. Is it near to

college

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or far from

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? (2)total cast of stay for 6 months? (3) what facilities will get with accommodation? if you have any

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be great and helpful. thank you. Looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Your faithfully. Rony Roy.

akankshayhedaoo10Sun May 19 2024

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grammar

Check your grammar and punctuation more carefully. For example, 'bugged' should be 'budget' and 'talk' should be 'help.'

structure

Ensure that you clearly separate your ideas into distinct paragraphs. For instance, present the course details, accommodation needs, and questions about the hostel in separate paragraphs.

coherence

Provide a more polished closing sentence. Consider something like, 'Thank you for your assistance and I look forward to hearing from you soon.'

tone

The letter is friendly, polite, and maintains an appropriate tone throughout, which makes it suitable for the context.

task response

You provided all the necessary details, including course, dates of arrival and departure, accommodation needs, and specific questions about the hostel, making your response complete.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

234 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
short course
training college
abroad
arrival date
departure date
private room
dietary needs
transportation options
reach
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