The bar charts below show the prevelance of obesity among boys and girls aged 12-19 years by ethnicity, in the United States for the years 2004 and 2014
The bar chart displays that about the percentages of
obesity
among boys
and girls
aged 12-19 years by 3 different ethnicity
in the United States in 2004 and 2014.
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the
obesity
rate
for non-Hispanic
white boys
was higher in 2014 than in 2004(17% and 12% respectively)。Similarly
, for non-Hispanic
black boys
, the obesity
rate
in 2014 was about twice that of 2004(20% and 11% respectively). In 2004, 13% of Hispanic boys
were obese, and in 2014, about a quarter were obese.
For girls
, the obesity
rate
for non-Hispanic
white girls
was 9% in 2004, and 14% in 2014. The obesity
rate
for non-Hispanic
black girls
was 16% in 2004, and more than a quarter were obese in 2014. Among Hispanics, 17% of girls
were obese in 2014, up from a tenth in 2004.
In summary
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summary,
boys
are more likely to be obese than girls
. In addition
, non-Hispanic
black girls
had the highest obesity
rates in 2014.Submitted by 3100880965 on
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