The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the number of families by their yearly salaries in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, the total amount of money they earned grew up
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while
each group had various numbers of livelihoods.
To begin
with, families who earned more than $100,000 were the largest group in 2007 and in
2015, Change preposition
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by
having nearly 30 Change preposition
apply
millions
and approximately 33 Change to singular
million
millions
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million
people
respectively. However
, the number of people
who earned less than $50,000 supassed
those in 2011. Correct your spelling
surpassed
On the other hand
, population
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the population
of
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with
the
salaries between $50,000 to $99,999 remained relatively flat in all periods.
Correct article usage
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Additionally
, two groups of people
who earned less than $50,000 displayed upward trends, while
they are
having slight shifts. Wrong verb form
were
People
who earned less than $25,000 had 20 millions
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million
people
in 2007, and the number increased up to nearly 25 millions
in 2015. Change to singular
million
However
, the remaining group had over 25 millions
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million
people
in 2007, which went up to nearly 30 millions
in 2011 which decreased a bit in 2015.Change to singular
million
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