A friend of yours invited you to a home party he/she arranged. However, you have just missed this party. Now you want to apologise for not attending it. Write a letter to your friend to apologise. In your letter, • apologise to your friend • explain why you did not attend the party • say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party

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Hi,

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my friend. I hope you are doing great. I'm writing to apologise for

I missed out

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missing

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your party that was on 10th

December

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. Please give me a chance

explain

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to explain

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and apologise. If you remember we met in

cafe

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the cafe

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on 1st

December

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and you invited me to your birthday. I

supposed

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was supposed

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to go

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to it

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apply

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but I wasn't able to go. I'm so sorry for

this

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. Let me set out the reason, the day before your party I and my family dropped

in to

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into

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Turkey because my aunt was getting married. Turkey is

magnificent

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a magnificent

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place

that is

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full of imposing buildings,

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however

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however,

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it is always packed with tourists. We had a great time.

Then

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we came back to Uzbekistan from Turkey on 13th

December

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. I don't want to upset you. I hope you will try to understand me. If you want we will meet another day-time and we will have a chat. Can we meet

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December

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on December

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15th

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brought

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bought

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the present for you. I think you like it. I will

wait

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wait for

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your response. Once again, I

apologise

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apologise for

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this

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. See you soon Best wishes Sarvinoz

omondavlat91Fri Jun 14 2024

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coherence cohesion

To improve the coherence and cohesion, make sure to use more transitional phrases like 'Firstly,' 'Additionally,' or 'Furthermore,' to clearly link each paragraph.

task achievement

For a better task achievement, make sure to address all the prompts completely, which you did well. Slightly elaborate on how missing the party affected you or your feelings about it to make a stronger impact.

coherence cohesion

Check for minor grammatical errors and awkward phrases such as 'I apologise this.' It should be 'I apologise for this.' This will improve the clarity of your letter.

suitable writing tone

The writing tone is suitable and friendly, which fits well for a letter to a friend.

complete response

The apology is clear and the reason for missing the party is well-explained.

logical structure

The letter has a good structure with a clear opening, body, and closing.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

183 words

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