A friend of yours invited you to a home party he/she arranged. However, you have just missed this party. Now you want to apologise for not attending it. Write a letter to your friend to apologise. In your letter, • apologise to your friend • explain why you did not attend the party • say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party
Hi
my friend.
I hope you are doing great.
I'm writing to apologise for Add the punctuation
Hi,
I missed out
your party that was on 10th Wrong verb form
missing
December
.
Please give me a chance explain
and apologise. If you remember we met in Fix the infinitive
to explain
cafe
on 1st Correct article usage
the cafe
December
and you invited me to your birthday. I supposed
to go Add a missing verb
was supposed
Change preposition
to it
it
but I wasn't able to go. I'm so sorry for Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
.
Let me set out the reason, the day before your party I and my family dropped in to
Turkey because my aunt was getting married. Turkey is Join the words
into
magnificent
place Add an article
a magnificent
that is
full of imposing buildings, however
it is always packed with tourists. We had a great time. Add a comma
however,
Then
we came back to Uzbekistan from Turkey on 13th December
.
I don't want to upset you. I hope you will try to understand me. If you want we will meet another day-time and we will have a chat. Can we meet December
15thChange preposition
on December
.
I Change the punctuation
?
brought
the present for you. I think you like it. I will Correct your spelling
bought
wait
your response.
Once again, I Add the preposition
wait for
apologise
Add the preposition
apologise for
this
.
See you soon
Best wishes
SarvinozSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
coherence cohesion
To improve the coherence and cohesion, make sure to use more transitional phrases like 'Firstly,' 'Additionally,' or 'Furthermore,' to clearly link each paragraph.
task achievement
For a better task achievement, make sure to address all the prompts completely, which you did well. Slightly elaborate on how missing the party affected you or your feelings about it to make a stronger impact.
coherence cohesion
Check for minor grammatical errors and awkward phrases such as 'I apologise this.' It should be 'I apologise for this.' This will improve the clarity of your letter.
suitable writing tone
The writing tone is suitable and friendly, which fits well for a letter to a friend.
complete response
The apology is clear and the reason for missing the party is well-explained.
logical structure
The letter has a good structure with a clear opening, body, and closing.