The two maps below show access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The figures illustrate the new construction of the routes that made the situation available for people to access a
city
hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, in 2007, there were two
main sections such
as a city
hospital and a car park with three roads and a bus stop. But, in 2010, this
complex changed significantly and improved better.
First of all, there was not any change in Ring Road
and the city
hospital. The car park which was used by staff and the public divided into two
parks in 2010. One of them was on the north, the right side of the Ring Road
. It was used for the public. This
area had an entrance that connected to Ring Road
. Also
, there was a staff car park on the south-east of the city
hospital, on the right side of the Hospital road
.
It can be seen that the bus stop changed into a bus station. It was built on the left side of Hospital Road
and connected to two
roundabouts by two
separate roads. The two
roundabouts mentioned were constructed on the north of the Hospital Road
and the south of it and it also
was on city
road
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