The two maps below show access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two maps below show access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The figures illustrate the new construction of the routes that made the situation available for people to access a
city
hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, in 2007, there were
two
main sections
such
as a
city
hospital and a car park with three roads and a bus stop. But, in 2010,
this
complex changed significantly and improved better. First of all, there was not any change in Ring
Road
and the
city
hospital. The car park which was used by staff and the public divided into
two
parks in 2010. One of them was on the north, the right side of the Ring
Road
. It was used for the public.
This
area had an entrance that connected to Ring
Road
.
Also
, there was a staff car park on the south-east of the
city
hospital, on the right side of the Hospital
road
. It can be seen that the bus stop changed into a bus station. It was built on the left side of Hospital
Road
and connected to
two
roundabouts by
two
separate roads. The
two
roundabouts mentioned were constructed on the north of the Hospital
Road
and the south of it and it
also
was on
city
road
.
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